From the review of A3, I need to work on a few things. I have identified that I should incorporate more of my opinions into my work. The feedback I received was that it was very factual, which was good, but that I should have more opinions to make my work better. In the future, I will work on this by taking more of a stand in my essays and content to improve my work.
Additionally, I intend on attempting to use more sources and content from classes to support the claims made in my essays. Additionally, adding a thesis statement would allow for the essay to have a stronger introduction.
In the future, I will take this feedback into consideration and do the following:
- Take a stand and include a strong thesis statement that highlights the overall summary of my arguments of the essay
- Navigate and use more sources, analytics and statistics to back up claims made in the essay.