Brenner JIA Individual Action Plan(A1)

  1. The structure of the paper is not clear. It should be clearly stated at the beginning what the intended content is before proceeding to a more in-depth exploration.
  2. The reading list for each week needs to be more thorough, as many citations do not convey the message I intend to express.
  3. The depth of the writing is not sufficient; frequently, definition of a concept remains at the surface level without critical thinking.
  4. The overall paper is inclined towards theory and lacks integration with practical applications, without relevance to real-world events.
  5. The quality of the writing is not good enough, and the grammar and some words are relatively simple.