First, I need to gain a deeper understanding of the topic in order to conduct a more detailed analysis. Additionally, when presenting theory and examples, I need to make sure they match each other better so that Ir point is conveyed more clearly.
Additionally, the relevance of the examples to the content needs to be improved, which can be achieved by more careful selection of examples. Although I have explained what the topic is about, the discussion needs to be developed more fully so that readers can better understand Ir position and perspective.
In terms of literature, make sure that the literature I choose has more specific relevance to the topic, and when citing literature, follow a standardized citation format to improve the accuracy and credibility of literature citation. This will help improve the quality and readability of Ir paper or article.