- Some transitions can trans better.
- Conclusions can conclude better and relate to the overall argument.
- Double check your referencing, bestie <3
- Effort is good and very healthy for the soul. You should try some.
- English major harder, please. Grammar and reading is part of your blood.
- Everything else is perfect. I am literally perfection.
Tips for A3!!!
- Find out what the heckles the Three I’s are.
- Read the rubric. Memorise the rubric. Become one with the rubric.
- Complete the draft in Week 12 or you are screwed. Don’t get into new fandoms until the semester ends, please.
- Apply above feedback to your work.