Feedback For Jianming Chen (A1)

I need to make sure I clearly define my topic and make my argument or position clear at the beginning.
And make sure the article has a clear structure, including an introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph should have a clear topic sentence, as well as arguments or evidence to support that topic sentence.
Make sure there are logical transitions between my arguments and paragraphs so the reader can follow your train of thought. Use transition words to help connect different ideas and paragraphs.
And I proofread my articles carefully to make sure there are no spelling or grammatical errors. These errors can reduce the professionalism of your article.
I need to pay more attention to professional formatting in references.