Feedback!!!

1. Some transitions can trans better.
2. Conclusions can conclude better and relate to the overall argument.
3. Double check your referencing, bestie <3
4. Effort is good and very healthy for the soul. You should try some.
5. English major harder, please. Grammar and reading is part of your blood.
6. Everything else is perfect. I am literally perfection.

Tips for A3!!!

• Find out what the heckles the Three I’s are.
• Read the rubric. Memorise the rubric. Become one with the rubric.
• Complete the draft in Week 12 or you are screwed. Don’t get into new fandoms until the semester ends, please.
• Apply above feedback to your work.