Assignment 1 Peer Feedback
Depth and Exploration: While the article mentions several domains of internet governance, it may benefit from deeper exploration or specific case studies in each area…
Actionable Plan
Zhirui Tian *FINISHING A2 *What I’m going to do on A3? 1. In A1 I didn’t have a good connection to the theory that we…
Ella A3 Improvement Plan
Citation Use a combination of academic and non-academic references to provide sufficient evidence and support for my analysis. 2. Depth of analysis Provide detailed analysis…
A3 Action Plan-Novem
sentences need further clarification or reorganization to improve readability. Clear writing Integrate more non-academic references to enhance the detail of the essay careful with citations…
A3 Action Plans – Xinyue Sun
Shortcomings that need improvement: Use more authoritative resources to support my arguments The background or definition of the topic needs to be discussed more The…
Assessment 3 plan Carina Zhang
1. Define my body of writing 2. To establish a coherent structure, it’s essential to arrange each part logically, ensuring clarity and organization. 3. To…
Harmful Baises In Search Engine Platform
Introduction With the gradual development of science and technology and the popularization of the use of the network, the search engine has become the most…
How Internet agencies can help govern cyberspace
Yifan Hu The emergence of the Internet has completely changed the way we communicate, obtain information and conduct business. With the continuous development of technology,…
Assignment 1 Peer Feedback
Positive thing: good integration of hyperlinks and academic references (super current and interesting examples enhanced the reading) Negative thing: work on making writing less clunky…
Assignment 1 Peer Feedback
Positive: Clear writing Actionable Steps for Improvements: Integrate more non-academic references to enhance the detail of the essay Be careful with citations Have more nuanced…