peer review 1 – Needs to do APA reference more concisely. Got diverse examples and good examples of Facebook.
Peer review 2 – providing a unique perspective, clear logic and holding own opinions. citing real world examples to support view.
peer review 3 –
Improvements for A3
I need to do more research and I think I have to arrange the topics with references more strongly. The real world hyperlinks were sufficient to prove the topics but need to add more strong evidence.
Need to put academic citations more precisely and research for relevant to topic.
Need to work on APA style references to rectify mistakes I did before. Also needs to improve writing quality while checking for grammar.