The sharing economy significantly contributes to sustainable urban development by optimizing resource utilization, reducing environmental footprints, and fostering social cohesion, though it presents challenges in…

to：Mingchen Jiang The article discusses many main viewpoints, but I think there are still some shortcomings in the subtle aspects. Overall, it is written perfectly….

For the next A3 final assignment, I plan to make the following adjustments. Correct my grammatical errors and make the logical expression of each sentence…

The main feedback I received from my A1 would be to improve my argument and critical analysis. I could also work on structuring my essay…

hopefully fix my grammatical issues better change the way I narrate my entire article without unnecessary repetitive questions more explanations to make the article easier…

Pu Chen Here are the changes I would make to future assessment-Use more accurate vocabulary and grammar-Select more representative examples-Be more specific and explain my…